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**This service is currently suspended but will resume in the new school year**
Free English Writing Assessment 

Every child can write. All they need is motivation and encouragement. It is my passion to inspire them by finding their strengths and target areas for improvement.

Send me a completed task (see below) and I will provide a free feedback assessment

(Absolutely no charge involved)


Send me a completed task (see below) and I will provide a free feedback assessment

Step 1

Ask your child to choose one picture from below and write a story following the word count for the age. Handwrite or type on A4 paper (Double space)

Please do not assist your child so that I can see their true ability. Use a timer and allow 30 minutes. No dictionaries should be used. You can find fun timers here:  

Allow your child to choose the sound (it makes it more fun for them).

Task: Choose one of the following pictures and write a story.

Follow the word count according to age:

K3-P1 - 50 Words or more

P2-P3 - 80 Words or more

P4-P6 - 100 Words or more

Tasks may be handwritten and scanned or typed. Please double line space and use pen (not pencil)

Step 2

Complete the form below to submit the writing. SUSPENDED FOR NOW - To resume in September

Step 3

You will receive the marked writing and a comments sheet covering the following areas:


Relevance and detail (with specific points)

Awareness of purpose

Engagement of reader’s interest

Creativity and imagination

Language and Style

Sentence structure variety

Accuracy and appropriateness

Whether meaning is conveyed

Vocabulary (wide and appropriate?)

Tone (formal or informal?) appropriate to the text-type and audience


Structure - matching genre and text type

Paragraph structure - topic sentences and elaboration

Cohesion (linking of paragraphs and ideas)

How well the overall piece of writing flows for the reader

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